Week 4 Reflection: Rise Peer Feedback

Ayesha, I really liked learning about your story and how you got to where you are today. I can relate to your digital story because, although you were working and making money, you wanted to go back to school to do something that you enjoy. It made me want to revisit my story and find what exactly my reasons were for going back to school. You mentioned your son and how you wanted to make a better life for the both of you, and I find that very inspiring.

What made you chose the style that you chose? When I chose mine, I chose something that I thought would represent me in the best way possible. I like that you included many personal pictures of yourself and your life, but I am curious as to how you decided what to include from yourself and what to include of the stock images?

One constructive thing that I would give you is regarding the audio. I thought that you talked rather quiet and it was hard to hear you over the music that you put on the video as well. I also thought, that although your story was very emotional, the way you spoke it made it less emotional and I would highly recommend adding more "feeling" to the audio and it would give it that extra touch to an already great video.

I found your video very inspiring and all around great. Your story of going to college to get something to make a better future for you and your son was amazing, and from what you said Full Sail seems to be a really great fit for you.